my storyboard

Is my Storyboard That I made I use people and they aren't as he two main character's I just made them look and turn into the main characters.
If you are wondering I use 24 pieces to make this and I right and might look like just one two up to 10 but no.
this is how it works "once upon a time there was a little girl she was pulling over friends and next minute that guy over there he got hit by a viable Sheratan over there he was scared because he is secretly an alien!!!!"
"Didn't want to know the he was secretly an alien that is why he just smiled when she go there she fell over she was a little bit scared of her smile the second picture there is her falling over."

"then the alien was thinking I could it be a Vampire the first year blood Monsters then he saw someone has our friends coming over like maybe this superheroes all wizard there's a bongo causing a book in the other guys holding a bet I don't want to die"
"Open up to milk staring at him like they wanted to buy them he got up and you're was scared but they all looking up at him with the mouth wide open and he walked away found a bench underneath the tree and he said down there next minute old man comes over to him he's a few word and then turns into an eagle and flies away I was confused"